Praca z anglika

Witam.
Zechce ktoś rzucić okiem na moją pracę z anglika i pobieżnie ja sprawdzić?? jeśli nie będzie taka zła to możecie ją sobie w zamian wykorzystać kiedyś jeśli sie przyda...

Proszę o błędy.

Oto praca na temat Polski (mam do szkoły napisać o Polsce, kilkanaście zdań):

    Poland is a small country in center of Europe. It’s situated on the Baltic sea. On the south are mountains. Poland border by Germany to the west, the Czech Republic and Slovakia to the south, Ukraine and Belarus to the east and Lithuania and Kaliningrad Oblast to the north. The longest river in Poland is Wisla.
    The oldest known tribes which were living in Poland were Polanie and Wislanie. The first historical lord of Poland was Mieszko I, who received baptism in 966. In middle ages Poland was fighting with Krzyzacy. In 1795 Poland disappeared of map of Europe on 123 years. In 1918 Poland got an independent nation. It had share in both World Wars. In 2004 Poland became member of European Union.
    In Poland live 39 millions occupants and 2 millions of them live in capital city – Warsaw. In Poland live Polishes but besides live there Germans, Belarusians, Ukrainians, too. In Poland occupants use Polish language.
    Tourist draw to Poland old but beautiful monuments. In Kraków we’ve Wawel castle and Kosciusko’s mound.  In Warsaw lie Kings Castle, Bathrooms Park and Culture and Science Palace. In Częstochowa is famous basilica. We have more another pretty cities.
    In Poland might go for a walk in mountains and forests. Although our sea is enough cool, each year rest there thousands people. We’ve even small desert near Katowice. We very value environment. There live even animals such as aurochs, whistlers, bibers.

           


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